Saturday, November 23, 2013

Excerpt: Goddess of Light

Hey guys! The Goddess of Light excerpt I promised!! Also, created a new header design for Excerpts!! Yay! If you didn't read the review yet click HERE.

"Hey, what's that?" he said, pointing at something that was glittering just at the edge of the surf, half covered by the sand her toes had dug up. 

He leaned forward - practically touching her - and grabbed a hold of the thing, lifting it free of the sand.

"Wow!" he said.

"It's awesome," she said. She couldn't look away from the bright coin that hung from the gold chain. It shined in the growing light, and she could see that it had the head of a man stamped on it. A really cute man with curly hair. 

"It's yours," he said solemnly.

"Mine? Nuh-uh."

"Yes-huh. It is. It was by your feet on your beach during your morning. It's definitely yours. He opened the the little clasp and put it around her neck. It hung there like a piece of the sun. Kristin touched it. It felt warm.


"My name's Kristin," she said.

"I'm Jordan," he said. They grinned at each other, and the sun exploded from the ocean and into the morning sky.


Neither teenagers noticed the tall blond woman who watched them from the shadows. Soul mates always do find each other, Artemis thought. I should have never doubted you, my brother. The goddess wiped her eyes and smiled wistfully as she faded silently into the waiting palm trees.

ARGH! This makes me wanna read the whole story again. Hope it sparked your interest!!

Foreverly Obsessed,

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